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CdnReader
08-29-2007, 05:07 AM
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To be born within stardust
Afar from the shackles that bind us here....
Can we be born again, on the far side of the universe?
And still continue our earthbound journey?
At once?

If this is possible,
I shall send my wings skyward
.....now.....
I shall pry thy fingers from my ankles
.....now.....
I shall lift thee from thy knees and take thee with me
.....now....
and we will travel there
as one,
floating high over this
troubled world....

I will wipe the worries from thy brow.
I will capture thy spirit within mine own.
I will hold thy heart in the palm of my hand
and whisper words of grace.

If this is possible,
then I wish it for all.

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ampoule
08-29-2007, 06:16 AM
The reading of this was very spiritual for me, like an early morning devotion. While you are probably now preparing for lunch I am preparing for breakfast.
Very lovely.

PrinceMyshkin
08-29-2007, 08:00 AM
How well you havre mastered the art of direct, open-hearted speech as in the opening and closing if this.

I doth wish though that thou wouldst ceaseth and desisteth in thy usage of the Biblical thees and thys. They maketh me thomewhat thelf-conthioth!

symphony
08-29-2007, 08:04 AM
u certainly ARE whispering words of grace. *applauds*

Pendragon
08-29-2007, 08:49 AM
Strong closing.

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Bravo.gif

Granny5
08-29-2007, 09:39 AM
I love this. It's just beautiful to read.

CdnReader
08-29-2007, 03:31 PM
Thanks so much, everyone. :)

(Jer, you really need to do thumthing about that lithp.)

firefangled
08-29-2007, 07:20 PM
This is so spontaneous and so like a prayer that the middle must be written the way you wrote it. Bless you and your words. Amen

CdnReader
08-30-2007, 06:46 AM
Thanks very much, Firefangled. :)

AuntShecky
08-30-2007, 12:03 PM
Some astrophysicists believe we (and everything else in the known Universe) literally comes from stardust.

Did you ever hear Hoagy Carmichael's standard of the
same title? The lyrics are by Mitchell Parrish.

CdnReader
08-30-2007, 03:01 PM
I'm familiar with both the song and the theory, AuntShecky. I love the concept.

And if not stardust,
then what?
Certainly not
genes and DNA,
couldn't be just
muscle and sinew....
and forget about all that
carbon/hydrogen mumbo-jumbo.

For me,
stardust
works just fine.

:)