<Friend>

[Avalive]

Friend

Life would not be a full moon
It never can be complete
Without a lover and a friend
And tonight I have you on my mind
My friend,I have you on my mind

Smile without anxiety
Speak without words
When I see you I can fall
In your hands I won't be hurt

You told me you found a man you love
I'm happy for your wedding
Like I'm having mine

Forget me not, my friend
Share your laughter and tears
Always I will be there
Along by your side

Life would not be life
It can never be real
Without a lover and a friend
And tonight, I have you on my mind
My friend, I have you on my mind

You told me you lost the man you love
I'm sad for your pain
Like I'm losing mine

Hug without desire
Cry without tears
When you see me you can fall
In my hands you won't be hurt

Life is a long road
Forever I will be
The one you call friend

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This is not a good poem. Not as good as I want for my friend. But, when she reads it, I hope she knows that the feeling I have for her and our friendship is every word I wrote and more.

[amuse]

i like how it's a story/journey, but not spelled out.
your empathy and care so shine through.

"And tonight I have you on my mind
My friend,I have you on my mind" reminded me that "music" has the same root as "muse."

it's like life with the hopes, joys, sorrows but all at once...

[Helga]

I liked it.

I love how you first say that you feel safe with her, then you tell her that she will always be safe with you.

it shows what friends do for you, they are there when your happy and enjoy good times with you, and they comfort you when you are sad.

[Jay]

Beautiful :).
...
Smile without anxiety
Speak without words
When I see you I can fall
In your hands I won't be hurt
...
Hug without desire
Cry without tears
When you see me you can fall
In my hands you won't be hurt

Like those two stanzas best :)

[Isagel]

You said that this is not a good poem. I think it will be one of the loveliest things your friend will ever get. It will be a wonderful gift. Like your friendship seems to be.

I really liked this part:
You told me you found a man you love
I'm happy for your wedding
Like I'm having mine

I think it is a good way of showing how friendship can make us be able to take joy in someone elses happiness, just because. Without any other motives.

[Jay]

In other words, coud we all be your friends?

[Suetang]

I have no doubt that your friend with love these words you have penned.

"Friendship is the finest rose
in the garden of life"

Take care..........Sue

[Avalive]

Ink is actually a stream from the heart. My emotion flows in it. When it runs through my notebook,here comes a poem which is a way I speak my mind.

[Saposcat]

I wrote a poem:

I woke up early one Monday morn,
My heart alight with vile and scorn,
I ate my breakfast and dropped a log,
And escaped as quick my mental fog.

[PrinceMyshkin]

This is not a good poem. Not as good as I want for my friend. But, when she reads it, I hope she knows that the feeling I have for her and our friendship is every word I wrote and more.

I'm afraid I disagree with your first statement. As for the next, that too is a tribute to your deep love for this person.

There are many wonderful things in this, not least is the reprise.