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CdnReader
08-27-2007, 04:16 AM
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softly
come to life
stirring gently in the morning warmth
consciousness arising....slowly, quietly,
climbing up from the depths of sleep

gradually
the dream-mist slips away
leaving pools of reflection....
memories of before-that-happened
imaginings of what-is-still-desired
watching silently as the visions
swirl and drift...
join to one

the past and the future
become now
softly

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motherhubbard
08-27-2007, 04:37 AM
lovely Cdn. that felt like a morning with no alarm clock, or what I think that kind of morning would feel like.

CdnReader
08-27-2007, 05:03 AM
Thanks, MH. I'm glad you liked this one. :)

PrinceMyshkin
08-27-2007, 06:06 AM
Softly is the face you show the world,
a face intelligent and kind, but
beneath that face
what a clamour!

CdnReader
08-27-2007, 08:31 AM
Mild-mannered university student on the outside...
A seething volcano on the inside....

Yup. You got it, babe. :D

ampoule
08-27-2007, 08:37 AM
I love those waking moments and your poem captured them. Mmmmmm. Yawn. Stretch.

CdnReader
08-27-2007, 08:44 AM
Meeee tooooo, Amp. Great way to start the day..... slow and easy.... If I can, I'll set my alarm an extra hour early, just so that I can indulge. :)