Choice

[CdnReader]

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the choice is yours, allow it to begin
strike out blindly or take it on the chin
keep your heart intact, or let it out to play
love without reservation, or allow the fears to weigh
heavy on your mind....opening the door
is something that seemed so easy before
but now that it's been wedged so tight
there’s no way, it seems, to let in the light

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[PrinceMyshkin]

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the choice is yours, allow it to begin
strike out blindly or take it on the chin
keep your heart intact, or let it out to play
love without reservation, or allow the fears to weigh
heavy on your mind....opening the door
is something that seemed so easy before
but now that it's been wedged so tight
there’s no way, it seems, to let in the light

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cdn/24aug07
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Wow! And I loved how gracefully you handled the rhymes and the enjambement! (I don't often enough get a chance to use that word, so please permit me to say again enjambement! Ah!)

[CdnReader]

Wow! And I loved how gracefully you handled the rhymes and the enjambement! (I don't often enough get a chance to use that word, so please permit me to say again enjambement! Ah!)

Well, I had to go look that word up! Kinda tough to be graceful about something you didn't know you were doing.... but then, who am I to disagree with you, Jer? :D

[Pendragon]

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the choice is yours, allow it to begin
strike out blindly or take it on the chin
keep your heart intact, or let it out to play
love without reservation, or allow the fears to weigh
heavy on your mind....opening the door
is something that seemed so easy before
but now that it's been wedged so tight
there’s no way, it seems, to let in the light

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.Very nice. I loved the part about letting your heart out to play.

Pen

[PrinceMyshkin]

Well, I had to go look that word up! Kinda tough to be graceful about something you didn't know you were doing.... but then, who am I to disagree with you, Jer? :D


L'enjambement de mon pere
est sur le quelque-chose ou l'autre de ma mere!

[CdnReader]

Very nice. I loved the part about letting your heart out to play.

Thanks, Pen. :)

[firefangled]

I agree with Prince, the rhymes in this are done very well. I like it.

[CdnReader]

Thanks very much, Fire. Much appreciated. :)