Literary Movement

[JTParreira]

You send me your poems,
I'll send you mine.
Robert Creeley


We will change our poetry
as who exchange the same

complicity in the eyes,
a quick word

it will tend to leave the circle
will leave obtuse angles

and the tautology
of the four walls

We will change silence,
small nothings with depths

You send me your poems,
especially those

to swim against the tide
I will send you mine.

J.T.Parreira

[TheFifthElement]

I love this:


as who exchange the same

complicity in the eyes,

and this:


will leave obtuse angles

and the tautology
of the four walls

I wasn't sure about the line breaks at first, but then after reading a few times I think it works really nicely. An interesting poem which prompts some thought. Thank you.

[Scheherazade]

I really like the title :)

[blp]

I will send a picture too
If you will send me one of you

it goes on. Creeley rocks.

Nice job JT, as always. I have to say, this sharing subject's a little ironic though, given that you still never seem to comment on anyone else's work here. You've got to give a little to get a little. Isn't that how literary movements work?

[Pendragon]

and the tautology
of the four walls


Wonderful turn of phrase there, Jer. Made the poem for me.

Pen