Keys

[CdnReader]

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We connect with many
Whose keys are different.
Together we open doors to new and wondrous places.
We learn together, we strive together....
We celebrate together.
And we grieve.

We connect with the one.
Our keys are the same.
Mine fits you, yours fits me.
My mind opens to embrace the beauty of you.
Your spirit welcomes my presence.
Our souls recognize, and rejoice,
Uniting in a bond that transcends the ages...
We were never apart.

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[Granny5]

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We connect with many
Whose keys are different.
Together we open doors to new and wondrous places.
We learn together, we strive together....
We celebrate together.
And we grieve.

We connect with the one.
Our keys are the same.
Mine fits you, yours fits me.
My mind opens to embrace the beauty of you.
Your spirit welcomes my presence.
Our souls recognize, and rejoice,
Uniting in a bond that transcends the ages...
We were never apart.

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This is great. I found my matching key and it is wonderful to. I just never thought of it like this.
Your poems always speak to me and I truely appreciate your talent.
Thank you, Cdn.

[PrinceMyshkin]

I especially loved how the thump of this


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We celebrate together.
And we grieve.

was echoed and reversed at the end:


Uniting in a bond that transcends the ages...
We were never apart.

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here is something so satisyfying (don't you find?) in ending a poem with such four everyday, plain but authoritative words!

[CdnReader]

Thanks very much, Granny and PM. And Jer? Yes. Oh, yessss........ :)

[Pendragon]

What was it Jack Sparrow said? "The thing about a key is, you got to know what it unlocks?" Now that you found the right keys, beware of lockpicks!

Pen

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[CdnReader]

Pen, I LOVE JACK SPARROW! And I still haven't seen #3.... :(

Thanks!

[ampoule]

Ooo baby, I like it. And now I am singing...'I've got a brand new pair of roller skates, you got a brand new key...' :D And I am not making light of your poem at all. It's very meaningful to me. I like it! Oh gosh..I already said that. ;)

[firefangled]

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My mind opens to embrace the beauty of you.
Your spirit welcomes my presence.




I love these two lines...along with all the others, of course. Very fine!

[Poppy]

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Our keys are the same.
Mine fits you, yours fits me.
My mind opens to embrace the beauty of you.
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These are my favorites cdn. It's so secure to know what your lockbox contains and that when its opened each time, what you expected is still there.

~Poppy

[CdnReader]

Thank you ever so much, Firefangled and Poppy. I'm delighted that you both liked this one. :)

Amp, if my words can cause you to break out into song, then my job here is done. <brushing my palms together, and wandering off....somewhere.... I'll be back......> *grin*