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dibyendra
08-16-2007, 12:35 PM
Everybody's leaving
now you guys are on the queue
flying to a far away land
with plans & dreams on your hand

Spaces are new,
traces of old memories lingers on and on...
i wonder if things are good as before
without friends like you...

new faces now fills your empty spaces
but still love the same old place
where memories reflect your presence
i shout and search for your glimpses

Do you remember ?
when we used to rush for a cup of tea
relish on small talk with faces glistened with smiles...
oh! now they have become just sweet nostalgic memories

nothing lasts forever but time will return
someday, for us to meet again for sure
with impregnable bonding of friendship in our motherland
cherishing good old days again and again !

firefangled
08-16-2007, 01:22 PM
Everybody's leaving
now you guys are on the queue
flying to a far away land
with plans & dreams on your hand

Spaces are new,
traces of old memories lingers on and on...
i wonder if things are good as before
without friends like you...

new faces now fills your empty spaces
but still love the same old place
where memories reflect your presence
i shout and search for your glimpses

Do you remember ?
when we used to rush for a cup of tea
relish on small talk with faces glistened with smiles...
oh! now they have become just sweet nostalgic memories

nothing lasts forever but time will return
someday, for us to meet again for sure
with impregnable bonding of friendship in our motherland
cherishing good old days again and again !

This transported me into some film that would be of a time, circa 1941, in a cafe where you were writing to friends separated by the time and circumstance. Very moving and the rhymes weaving in and out of the lines supported the poem very nicely.

dibyendra
08-16-2007, 11:07 PM
Thank you firefangled for your comment and appreciating my poem. I'm really happy to hear that !

totyfroty
08-17-2007, 01:26 AM
This is very touching. It is so nice and simple.

Good luck

dibyendra
08-17-2007, 05:41 AM
This is very touching. It is so nice and simple.
Good luck

Thank you toty for your comment and wish. I'm so glad that this poem touched your heart.

You know that it's really hard letting friends go to whom we have spent years and years with them. Anyway, hoping that we'll meet again.

dibyendra
08-18-2007, 05:03 AM
I have worked again on this poem and made many changes to the previous one. So, please provide suggestions or any other comments to help me write even more better.

We'll meet again (Revised at Aug 19, 2007)

Everybody's leaving one by one...
and now you guys are on the queue
to fly million miles faraway land
with plans and dreams on your hand

Do you know that we've moved to a new space?
but traces of old memories lingers on and on...
I wonder if things are good as before
without friends like you...

New faces now fills your empty spaces
but still love the same old place...
where memories reflect your presence
I shout and search for your glimpses

Remember the time...
when we used to rush for a cup of tea
and relish on small talks with faces glistened with smiles
Oh! ‬now they have become just sweet nostalgic memories

Nothing lasts forever but time will return
Someday for us to meet again for sure
with new faces of ours in our motherland
we shall cherish good old days once again !