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calupmoney81
08-13-2007, 02:39 PM
these are some poems ive writen this year im 14 years old and love to write tell me what you think about them or give me some advice if you think i need it which i proboly do

calupmoney81
08-13-2007, 02:42 PM
Wanted


I know there is others but
I want you
I know some really like me but
I want you
I know some maybe nicer at times but
I want you
But I've Got to know something
Do you want me to??

calupmoney81
08-13-2007, 02:47 PM
My happy place



I canhear the waves
Crashing agaist the sand with
the wind blowing the palm trees
me and my girl just chillen
with no burdens
no worries
no rules
no people
no clouds or rain
we would have any and everything
we wanted or needed

calupmoney81
08-13-2007, 02:52 PM
Why?


If she doesnt love me
why to i go back
If she isnt meant for me
why cant i let her go
If she try
why wont i give up
If she never thinks of me
Why cant i stop thinking of her
If she will never dance with me
Why cant i stop dreaming
even if she doesnt love me can i love her

calupmoney81
08-13-2007, 02:59 PM
Confusoin



I cant stand life without her
even though i havent had her
she knows i like her
i have kno clue if she likes me
she acts like she does
but she says she dont
has it changed
will it ever

calupmoney81
08-13-2007, 03:04 PM
togehter



why dont we get togther
dont you think we could make it together
dont you think i coul take it togehter
or are you afraid we could not keep it together
i do my best to try an bring us togeter
sometimes i think you dont want us together
do you think we could pull through together
just think of what we could do if we were together forever