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Avalive
06-05-2004, 08:55 PM
Wear Your Heart

Somnolent autumn paves the road for snow
Colors of lonely season knit a veil for heaven
I wear your heart on the lace of my sleeve
Miles away you would see it dancing around

November's sun so mild yet so warm
Lights of solar heat paint you in my eyes
I wear your heart on the pendant of my pearl
In darkness you would see it shining bright

Sleepless lamp waits for the break of dawn
Coldness of morning's fog dispels the town
I wear your heart on the chain around my neck
Forever you would see it holding on

Jay
06-07-2004, 06:32 PM
Nice :), if it wasn't midnight I might have something intelligent to say ;). It seems to me like the process of falling in love deeper and deeper...

Avalive
06-08-2004, 12:26 AM
Thanks for reading

I remember u Jay. U r the one who read my script HUE

Jay
06-08-2004, 06:50 AM
That would be me :p;)
Btw, how did the script go? I mean, if I remember it right it was kinda a schoolwork, what the teacher said?

Avalive
06-08-2004, 08:05 PM
It almost went to trash can. Can not submit a script I don't even like myself. I'm working on a new one. But...It's so hard. I'm not a good storyteller. Anyway,just keep working till I satisfy myself.

Suetang
06-09-2004, 12:01 AM
Absolutely beautiful!

Take care........Sue

Jay
06-09-2004, 10:06 AM
Would like to read the next script you write if possible :).

Avalive
06-09-2004, 06:20 PM
Thanks.
I will send it to ya if I'm done with it. U can also see the film someday(not too long) based on these script. Cuz,script isn't novel,it can be boring cuz I don't describe a lot, or beautify the story by words too much. Script is basically like a outline of plot. Film can beautify my words. That's what I do. I ain't writter,but a filmmaker. However,I'm trying to organize my script more like novel,so that the one who read it can undersand it well,so they can act well.

Jay
06-10-2004, 09:48 AM
Goody :D, would like to see the film as well :p. Would be interesting seeing the the film for the scrip you posted. Especially how the monologues would fit into the scenes, at times it seems like he was thinking (having a monologue lol) while the others were talking. Before I go all babbly about it, is there even going to be a film to the original script? (original meaning the one you posted lol ;)).