What it saw the Lot’s Wife

[JTParreira]

The ground did not receive
the rest of the Lot's wife: of foot
it stayed of foot to emerge
of the lowest molecules of salt
the sunk white dream in silence
did not have following morning, never
emerging of the dawn.

J.T.Parreira

[firefangled]

The ground did not receive
the rest of the Lot's wife: of foot
it stayed of foot to emerge
of the lowest molecules of salt
the sunk white dream in silence
did not have following morning, never
emerging of the dawn.

J.T.Parreira

This is so strange inside my head. It is one of those you get and don't get simultaneously. But I like it for that. Love the sound of "the sunk white dream in silence"

[Pendragon]

Another trip to the salt mines, another gem unearthed! (I really should have thought of this one myself...)

Good one, Jerry!

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Pen