Extemporaneous Speech

[RoCKiTcZa]

I am a freshman in PSHS, and in school we are required to do an extemporaneous speech every quarter, or a speech that is prepared beforehand and performed through memory or with a short guide card. This is a speech that I wrote for this quarter's Extempo on our unified class topic, "Who I Am as a Teenager," and I was wondering if you could make some comments on my thirty-minute midnight manuscript... ;) Thanks!!!

my speech is attached to this... :p

[chasestalling]

very advanced i must say

[RoCKiTcZa]

Really? Gee, thanks!!! ;)
Anyone else interested in commenting on my work?

[andave_ya]

very cool, very gripping, and seriously, you'll be nominated teenager of the year. :) Hope you get an A!