My Girl in the World

[calupmoney81]

there is a girl
she stayis in my mind like gum sticks to your shoe
she knows i cant ryhme
also i dont have a single dime
but she sticks with me though it all

if she falls i pick her up
if fall its all of a suden funny
he laugh is wounerful
mine is like a ckale

[calupmoney81]

please dont be to critcal im olny 14 write is a way to get away from it all for me and i try to take it serously i dont get to do it much but i try to when i can

[Granny5]

there is a girl
she stayis in my mind like gum sticks to your shoe
she knows i cant ryhme
also i dont have a single dime
but she sticks with me though it all

if she falls i pick her up
if fall its all of a suden funny
he laugh is wounerful
mine is like a ckale

It's a cute poem and she's a lucky girl.

[Bakiryu]

please dont be to critcal im olny 14 write is a way to get away from it all for me and i try to take it serously i dont get to do it much but i try to when i can

I'm not trying to be critical and I am your same age and a witter, but your spelling is atrocious. You should get spell checker and your poems would at least be understandable. :blush:

[Logos]

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