Personal Prose

[LucienMidnight]

Candle, wax canvas
Iron Eyes
Weeping Carmel
Hour, glass transparent
Absent Ears
Listen Sugar
Wind, rose Damp
Dance Nose
Smell Cinnamon
Snake, skin snail
Inhale lips
Moist dough
Con, tour lines
Design hair
Red licorice

[libernaut]

its pretty interesting to read. it was concise, but the images were all very clear. I liked your choice of words to convey your feeling. kudos.

[Pendragon]

I like it. Reminds me of e.e. cummings. You give the words and the images flash to the reader in an order that might not be the same for every one. Marvelous!

Pen

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