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CdnReader
08-01-2007, 03:51 AM
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A Place of Enchantment

As I wander aimlessly
through this green and wondrous land....
I come upon a forest glade.
A long, low wooden table stretches
as far as the eye can see....
and further.

Elves, fairies and other magical creatures scurry about...
sometimes only glimpsed from the corner of my eye
(because some do not like to be seen by mere humans, you see)
refilling enormous golden platters,
pouring a silvery stream of glittering liquid into sparkling crystal chalices,
brushing crumbs from the velvet cushions,
straightening the silverware,
touching up the bouquets of
....creamy white lilies
....deep red roses
....and daisies

Who has placed this magnificent feast here?

As I draw nearer...
a small one runs forward with an eager smile....
She takes my hand gently
with a delicate touch that speaks of
….silken softness
….quiet tranquillity
….eons of remembrance
and leads me forward wordlessly.
Her iridescent wingtips
brush my bare arms softly,
unobtrusively.

“Come,” she whispers shyly,
in a voice that sounds like wind chimes,
and indicates an empty space.

In amazement,
I gather my legs under me,
and lower myself onto the sapphire velvet cushion,
not yet knowing what is expected of me
in this place of enchantment.

There are others all around,
and plates are passed.
It is only then that I realize
that the feast presented here
offers not food for the body,
but for the spirit.

The platters are heaped with…
Genuineness
Tenderness
Generosity
Patience
Wonder
Delight
Love

All are offered in silence.
All are offered in unlimited quantities.
There is nothing you cannot have.

Will you join me in the forest?

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symphony
08-01-2007, 06:30 AM
sounds like a dream i had once...it was one of the most wonderful dreams i ever had...i was in a forest and this child came up to me...and then there were pixies flying around her head...

anyway, i guess i just wanted to say - wow! :)

PrinceMyshkin
08-01-2007, 10:06 AM
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A Place of Enchantment

As I wander aimlessly
through this green and wondrous land....
I come upon a forest glade.
A long, low wooden table stretches
as far as the eye can see....
and further.

Elves, fairies and other magical creatures scurry about...
sometimes only glimpsed from the corner of my eye
(because some do not like to be seen by mere humans, you see)
refilling enormous golden platters,
pouring a silvery stream of glittering liquid into sparkling crystal chalices,
brushing crumbs from the velvet cushions,
straightening the silverware,
touching up the bouquets of
....creamy white lilies
....deep red roses
....and daisies

Who has placed this magnificent feast here?

As I draw nearer...
a small one runs forward with an eager smile....
She takes my hand gently
with a delicate touch that speaks of
….silken softness
….quiet tranquillity
….eons of remembrance
and leads me forward wordlessly.
Her iridescent wingtips
brush my bare arms softly,
unobtrusively.

“Come,” she whispers shyly,
in a voice that sounds like wind chimes,
and indicates an empty space.

In amazement,
I gather my legs under me,
and lower myself onto the sapphire velvet cushion,
not yet knowing what is expected of me
in this place of enchantment.

There are others all around,
and plates are passed.
It is only then that I realize
that the feast presented here
offers not food for the body,
but for the spirit.

The platters are heaped with…
Genuineness
Tenderness
Generosity
Patience
Wonder
Delight
Love

All are offered in silence.
All are offered in unlimited quantities.
There is nothing you cannot have.

Will you join me in the forest?

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cdn/13apr07
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Whether I join you are not kind of depends on whether you end with the quiet uplift, the pleasant surprise of

offers not food for the body,
but for the spirit.

or whether you choose to spell it all out for me!

I love the way the more contained earlier lines are allowed to grow more free, more spacious in the second verse as, presumably, the allure of this vision grows more compelling.

motherhubbard
08-01-2007, 10:13 AM
I think this is my favorite from you. How wonderful!

Pendragon
08-01-2007, 10:53 AM
I second Mother H. Wonderful, this one.

Pen

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CdnReader
08-01-2007, 12:38 PM
Symphony, I think you and I had the same dream! LOL! :D

Motherhubbard and Pendragon, many thanks for your lovely words. Greatly appreciated.

And.... just for you, Jer.... I'm in the process of producing a slimmed-down version that ends with the word