stupid me...

[stephofthenight]

do you ever take time to marvel at the stupidity that people have sometimes, and how we cost ourslefs the best thing that has ever happend to us by doubting that they could love you...well i one of those people who drive everything that they love away... so here is to tabbitha, my beautiful angel

what have i done
for this lonely night
what can be won
how can i make it right

your laughter is fading
my heart is losing you
tonight is the one ive been dreading
i wish i would have said i love you too

but what can be done
what can i say to make it right
what had i won
im finaly seeing into the night

im losing your love
where no longer one
im a lonsem dove
now we are done

i wish i could take it back
turn back time and hold you tight
trust is all we lacked
i wish could make it right

what can i say
what can i do
when you tell me to stay away

distantly i watch
your leaving me
getting on that yacht

why cant we be
the perfect couple
from my memory

[Pendragon]

Nice poem, Steph. Just watch spelling, OK? If you write in Word or any Word processing software, use the spellcheck. And proofread out loud.



im losing your love
where no longer one
im a lonsem dove
now we are done


See? What you meant was:


I'm losing your love
we're no longer one
I'm a lonesome dove
now we are done


The poem is sad, but a beautiful sad.

Pen

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[stephofthenight]

yeah sorry, i dont have word on this computer i normaly run them thou.
thanks

[ampoule]

A heartfelt poem. I would love to answer your question but this particular answer is different for everyone. O life. O love.