Meteor Lake

[Montana]

The white house
That standeth in that lake
In the centre
Simple and quiet
Surrounded by the water
And under the night sky
I can’t see their true colours

This is our world
We’ve hidden ourselves here
Whenever we wanna get away from the noise out there
The unseen fences are there
That no one can step into this territory

Do you still remember
That afternoon
When the sun was shining
From the angle of 50 degrees
Mint scent filled the air
Autumn wind was waltzing around
With the grass, trees and leaves
The sky was transparently blue
And the water was aquamarine
The house was there, my house
We started our sail to the house from the shore
We rocked the boat
There was laughter
But it was soon taken away by the wind
And we sat in my house
We looked around
And it was the lake encompassing us
Peaceful air, peaceful lake
Then rain poured down
When the sun was still brightly shining

Tonight, I’m not in my house
But laying on the grass
The world is out there
But it is quiet here
And look
There are the meteors
And I can’t hear them falling

[ampoule]

This is so beautiful Montana. I may have to drag my blanket outside tonight.
And please do not take this as a criticism, but did you really want to use 'wanna'?