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Countess
07-24-2007, 08:14 PM
Part Two of Modern Romantic Poetry... (also a work in progress)

ECOMNIUM TO THE GLORIOUS ROMANTIC ERA

Once upon a midnight dream I saw
Twin toppled towers astride a mottled moon
Which from below a dim-lit bower gazed on
Between two tree tops hung in wretched gloom

The arbor door cracked, revealed a somber sprite
Whose hollowed eyes bespoke some horrid tale
A tragic figure! This small frame all wrapped in white
Which hurried to the far side of the dale.

Before the armied forest she ceased her flight
Aside a weak Willow, its bleak face buried in the ground
Then stretched forth her hand, released some glinted gold
Spread forth the shiny dew-drops all around.

The gilded tears glimmered, shimmied grim unnatural dance -
A terrible twosome tango betwix the lunar haze
That pierced the darkness like a wicked wizard’s glance -
Then rose up - nay, grew - from ghastly flowers into graves!

“These are my children” she moaned or seemed to, for her lips stayed fixed
Like twins attached.
“An unearthly school, a mottled lot from another shore.
This one, a white albatross brought home, and this one, a black raven named Lenore.”

Lenore. At that name a diabolical pitch arose from below the freckled dust
A paralyzing sound, unutterable! No human word could form
The cacophonic cries that soared from that damnable ground,
Or shape the wraiths which ascended from that condemned shore.

With ghoulish countenances each, in turn, took a bow
And introduced himself, first Coleridge, then Byron and Yeats,
Poe recited a melancholic round while Wollstonecraft read verse
To Shelly and Johann Keats.

Then that cursed light whose advent heralds the sun
Stormed through the shade, across my naked cheeks
To peer below my peaceful, virgiled lids
And with grim reality, my dreamer’s dream erased -
NEVERMORE!

Niamh
07-25-2007, 05:14 AM
pure http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q268/niamhking/fairy.gif
wonderful poem.

symphony
07-25-2007, 05:31 AM
i'm not familier with the word "ecomnium", i wonder if anyone can enlighten me?

symphony
07-25-2007, 05:48 AM
and another thing.
Countess: can i, with ur permission, copy this poem to another thread in this personal poetry section, mentioning the author's name of course?

motherhubbard
07-25-2007, 06:23 AM
Countess, this is lovely. I’ve looked at it so many times I can’t believe I haven’t posted yet. I like this second part better than the first part. I think it is more accessible and still very telling. I love your language and you really have an awesome vocabulary. I find that true with so many young people here on this sight. It impresses me.

Countess
07-25-2007, 10:26 AM
i'm not familier with the word "ecomnium", i wonder if anyone can enlighten me?

Ecomnium is a derivative of the word "ecomium" and means "one who cannot spell". (-:

Thanks for pointing that out.

Me not spel write.

Countess
07-25-2007, 10:27 AM
and another thing.
Countess: can i, with ur permission, copy this poem to another thread in this personal poetry section, mentioning the author's name of course?

Sure. Would that be in the "poems that sucketh" section? :D I think it would fit in nicely there...

C

Countess
07-25-2007, 10:33 AM
I think it is more accessible and still very telling.

Why, I absolutely agree, and now the entire point of the poem has been made. By setting a modernist verse (discussing ideas) aside a romantic one (where ideas are entrenched in a narrative ala "The Raven", "The Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner" or "Cristobel"), I attempted to demonstrate the superiority of the Romantics.

Thank you for grasping it.

motherhubbard
07-25-2007, 11:36 AM
Ecomnium is a derivative of the word "ecomium" and means "one who cannot spell".

check it out, Latin for Motherhubbard!