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DeathAngel
07-24-2007, 04:30 PM
(ps: not meant for children's eyes!)


The Candy Man

Come my child,
Come & play for a while.
I have candy & sweets for you,
If you’re a good boy I’ll give you cakes too.
Eat, eat as much as you like.
Don’t worry about anything my little tyke.
For tonight we shall eat & eat,
And have us a great little feast.
Of food beyond your wildest dreams,
Just stay here with me, for all as it seems.
And stay, stay just for a while.

So says the little candy man,
Watch for the little candy man.
For he may eat you, in a stew, or a can,
Or he’ll eat you alive in a frying pan.

Come, come my child,
Come & play for a while.
As I sharpen my forks & knifes,
I am so lonely for you see, little child I have no wives.
So you keep me company in my great little feast,
All I’ll need is little more salt & a little yeast.
First I’ll cut you up & drink your blood,
Skin you nice & throw it in the mud.
There you go in the oven to bake,
As I watch your dead little eyes still awake.
Come, come my child, & play for a while.

So says the little candy man,
Watch for the little candy man.
For he may eat you, in a stew, or a can,
Or he’ll eat you alive in a frying pan.



-very gruesome, blea, i love it

Lily Adams
07-25-2007, 03:14 AM
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That was amazing! Oh, I'm a sucker for poems like these. Like a fractured fairy tale. I like that. Unhappy fairy tales.

Are you influenced by Tim Burton at all? He would write something like that. :nod:

*reads it again* THAT IS SUCH TALENT. I really, really, REALLY like it. Keep it up!

motherhubbard
07-25-2007, 04:08 AM
Well, It was a scary as the title sounded. Horribly scary, and the ending more so than the beginning.

symphony
07-25-2007, 04:08 AM
:eek: no wonder i dont like candies!! :eek:

lovely poem btw ;) i love these poems too, flows ever so swiftly.

Pendragon
07-25-2007, 12:57 PM
Hey kid watch Freddy Kruger, so your poem shouldn't shock them! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/freddykrueger.gifGood show!

Pen