And this is what happens when Bakiryu watches anime

[Bakiryu]

I feel the waves of memory
Pulling my back to you
Like a fire I cannot resist
Burning quickly on my skin

And my heart beats
So wildly caged
When your words were all I needed
To fly away free.

Yup, random poems. I'll bet nobody will read this yet I want to post a poem before I leave.

[motherhubbard]

Like a fire I cannot resist
Burning quickly on my skin

When your words were all I needed
To fly away free.
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I loved the imagery in these two parts. It has a very seductive quality to it. I'm sure you'll have more to say before you go, but have a safe and wonderful trip incase I don't speak to you again.

[dramasnot6]

I love it Baki,never doubt your talent. This is short but powerful

[toni]

Yea, Baki, don't doubt it.. and besides, i could relate to your poem :) the message came across clearly, and you choose your words well. :thumbs_up

[ampoule]

Well, I read it and I liked it. Ditto what ^ they said, and more.
Yes, have a safe trip.

[Pendragon]

Leaving so soon, Ryu?

Fare the Well Ryu

The white-haired ninja anime maid alive in her cartoon world.
Sets sail on the seas of harsh reality in search of what, pray tell?
Beyond the skies drawn by artists hands the world is null and void,
But inside the mind each creates and fashions private heavens; private hells.
The world there is populated by imagination solely,
Nothing there is impossible or even hard to seek and find.
You never have to feel discarded, outcast, or lonely
Beneath the Breezes Blown by the Windmills of Your Mind.
So, Little Dragon, as you depart from our close-knit society,
Where the Well of Mimir drives the pens of our poetry,
Forget not that behind you there is a place by the fire in our community,
And a cup and platter that always will be there for thee.
I hate good-byes, they choke this old Dragon up so badly Ryu:
Wander ever so far, be sure, we will not forget you...

Pendragon
© 7/22/07

[Bakiryu]

I love your poem! *hugs p-dragon!* So beautiful :bawling:

Thanks you guys! :bawling: :bawling: :bawling: :bawling:

[Bii]

Meant to respond to this yesterday - a very powerful and emotive poem Bakiryu. You'll be missed on the site - aren't there computers where you're going?

[Bakiryu]

well, i'm back now,. but there weren't any computers (NOT INTERNET!!!) unless you pay per hour.