Things Gonna Go My Way

[Night Closet]

I’ll call the sun at night
To announce no rules to strike
I’m gonna give up mystery love
I’ll know from what happiness is made of
I’ll dance, jump, dream and go
To places that no one will ever know
Everywhere away of reality
To lands know nothing called gravity
There won’t be lonely nights
There will be specials to write
Many things never put me and nothing apart
Somewhere deserves to be carved in my heart
Somehow I’ll be part of no silly game
Some way I’ll stop the steamy rain
And I’ll go screaming to say
Things ganna go my way

[PrinceMyshkin]

I especially like these lines:



Somewhere deserves to be carved in my heart
Somehow I’ll be part of no silly game
Some way I’ll stop the steamy rain
And I’ll go screaming to say
Things ganna go my way

Thank you.

[dramasnot6]

You have a really interesting poetic voice.
Well done.

[Night Closet]

Dear "PrinceMyshkin" and "dramasnot6",
Thanks from all of my heart for your knid words ..... i truly wrote this poem after passing a harsh exprience........and i'm happy that i wrote something which won thy admiration....lol :)

[Nossa]

I loved your words and how you got your emotions and idea across.
Keep it up :D

[Pendragon]

Very nice: These are my favorite lines, having refused to live in the real world at times myself:



I’ll dance, jump, dream and go
To places that no one will ever know
Everywhere away of reality


Pen

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[Night Closet]

Dear "Nossa And Pendragon"

I'm so happy for finding my worsd good and admirable....these days actually i'm confronting a problem with writing poems....i lost my MUSE.....pray for me to find him again...lol

[Night Closet]

come on readers ...i need more comments...:D

[Bruce Bradley]

I must agree with Pendragon I also like these lines the best.

I’ll dance, jump, dream and go
To places that no one will ever know
Everywhere away of reality

I have been to many places where I knew no one and some I couldn't speak the language. There is nothing like it, it will take your breath away. You can relax and be yourself for there is no one to comment on it. There is no reality only the here and now. Anyway thanks for the poem it very nice to read. There was other parts I liked and some were mysterious.

[Red_Rose]

I really like "Things Ganna Go My Way" is could see wha you are saying. i can relate to it strongly. Keep Writing