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enigmatic-soul
07-19-2007, 07:45 PM
He was a mystery but now he is a history
A cold smile on his face you could always see,

And a kind beating heart you could never hear,
You see him standing strongly as a stone,

But you never saw his hard less soul,
Though he was rude,

He owned the kindest heart you'll ever know
He was hurt by his fears
But no one saw him drowning in his tears

He was like a silent tone with broken dreams and soul
And hiding behind fake thoughts,

But now his gone ,
But my eyes will never cry, as I hold him deep in my heart,

I can't believe I have lost him
I don't wanna believe that he's gone

Time has engraved his voice in my ears
And his words are still running on my mind,

All that I can do ,is laughing sadly on my blues
As he is the loss I can't replace

last year a dear friend was hospitalized and he was about to die i wrote this to him and i'm glad that he is not a history yet :yawnb:

Debrasue
07-19-2007, 08:18 PM
Just Beautiful enigmatic-soul! And I'm so glad your friend is still here...you obviously love him very much....

PrinceMyshkin
07-19-2007, 09:40 PM
He was a mystery but now he is a history
A cold smile on his face you could always see,

And a kind beating heart you could never hear,
You see him standing strongly as a stone,

But you never saw his hard less soul,
Though he was rude,

He owned the kindest heart you'll ever know
He was hurt by his fears
But no one saw him drowning in his tears

He was like a silent tone with broken dreams and soul
And hiding behind fake thoughts,

But now his gone ,
But my eyes will never cry, as I hold him deep in my heart,

I can't believe I have lost him
I don't wanna believe that he's gone

Time has engraved his voice in my ears
And his words are still running on my mind,

All that I can do ,is laughing sadly on my blues
As he is the loss I can't replace

last year a dear friend was hospitalized and he was about to die i wrote this to him and i'm glad that he is not a history yet :yawnb:

What a kind soul you must be and I bet this did him as much good as some of the medical attention he received.

enigmatic-soul
07-21-2007, 07:40 PM
Just Beautiful enigmatic-soul! And I'm so glad your friend is still here...you obviously love him very much....


i'm glad that he is fine too thank you:yawnb:

enigmatic-soul
07-21-2007, 07:42 PM
What a kind soul you must be and I bet this did him as much good as some of the medical attention he received.

thank you, i wish he knows how much i care about him