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Bakiryu
07-17-2007, 11:53 PM
Homunculi

Dawn
I want to stay in love with my sorrow
Day
Tell the sun not to shine in my eyes
Birds
Don't sing the songs that hurt my ears
Time, go faster until everything stops

I want to stare at the night sky
But the stars hurt my eyes
And they bleed

As my heart bled when I kissed your lips
Now so cold
As my hands became a bloody crucifix

Rain
Fall until I drown in my memories
Snow
Cover everything with a blanket of white scars

Earth: Stay spinning
Forever and ever
My heart dies
As i try to smile

Love
Run
Dream
Into the darkness
Because of love I am now
Human.


Bakiryu

Little dragon
Red, red dragon
Struggling in your wings about to fly
Tell me have you seen the world
From inside of your crystal ball?

Little brother
Sweet, sweet brother
Stretch your wings and take to the air
Tell me if somewhere in the world
Lives a lover true and fair

If you should fly a thousand nights
If I should dream a thousand dreams
Write in your palms the ghostly stories
And all the things that surrounded you

I'll never tell
For nowhere
Nowhere in the world
Lives a love
that's true
and fair.



Light-bearer

Fairest and fallen
Greetings and defiance
Fairest and fallen
A bow and a prayer

When the world wakes
and twirls upon hands of light
And the moment stretches into infinity

You stretch those wings that can no longer fly
Into a black void of nothingness
Until night covers my eyes
And we fall so gently into sleep

I dreamt you kissed my lips
And the world turned
While you were sleeping.

Debrasue
07-18-2007, 01:35 AM
Wow!!! Bakiryu....when your Muse hits...she hits hard!....Amazing...I love every single phrase....must read again....beautiful imagery....

the silent x
07-18-2007, 04:09 AM
great job baki, i thnk you hit the nail on the head with the hommaculi poem

Bakiryu
07-18-2007, 07:25 AM
I love my muse *dances with joy* i've been up all night writing and drawing. I can't fall asleep now.

symphony
07-18-2007, 07:46 AM
ur muse is worth loving baki :eek:

Pendragon
07-18-2007, 10:52 AM
You sing, Ryu? Your poetry does. I can easily imagine sitting in the twilight with a guitar propped up hitting notes and following words where the tune might take me to write these kind of poems. Love it!

Pen

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/PuppyLove.gif

Bakiryu
07-18-2007, 11:06 AM
I'm a pretty bad singer thought *laughts*, here's my baby:

http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa137/Bakiryu7/HPIM0558.jpg

CABSHA
07-19-2007, 07:37 PM
Bakiryu, Homunculi was a big wave of feelings. beautiful.....