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madrox
05-16-2004, 04:41 AM
The Black mist
Surrounds my every movement
No matter how fast I run
No matter where I go
It's always there
Clouding my judgment

When I look into the mist
I see the souls that it has consumed
Whispering to me
Telling me their stories
I feel their pain
And know what I must do

I open my mouth
And breathe in
Draw the mist deep into my lungs
In a deafening scream
The souls are set free

The black mist lives inside me
The only soul it can consume now
Is mine
It'll be with me until I find a cure
A cure called love

Koa
05-16-2004, 10:48 AM
I like it. I can really relate to it.
(even if I hate to see love as a solution...hope there's more to life than that).

Kendall
05-16-2004, 10:09 PM
Cool Nick.

Helga
06-03-2004, 02:59 PM
love it, very good.....