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dibyendra
07-07-2007, 08:09 AM
This is a poem which I have written remembering the past when we both were together and the time we shared together.


Your Voices

your voices, I can still recall
still I hear them loud and clear
when we met for the first time
your voice, so innocent, soft, & gentle

your voices, after the time went by
they were never the same again
they come crashing down on me
voices, in which I can feel your pain

your voices, so innocent
innocence showing your pitiful situation
sometimes they burst in pain and anger
hunger for true love and affection

your voices, they changed with time
time that stole your innocence
my voices, they had been a waste for you
for you, they never made a good sense

your voices, they were sick and tired
sick & tired of social norms, do's and don't s
and you, willing to escape from reality
very impatient to run away from hypocrite society

and our voices, they were all entangled
untangled unspoken
and it's you, faded away leaving a painful void
which can never be filled with tears

dibyendra
07-07-2007, 08:38 AM
This poem is personal yet listed in "Poems, Poets, and Poetry" section as moved yet that link points to some other poem of mine. Could somebody (Moderator) fix that ? Thank you.

Pendragon
07-07-2007, 09:31 AM
So sad, yet haunting. Lovely poem.

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dibyendra
07-15-2007, 12:01 AM
Thanks Pendragon for your kind words and appreciation.

CdnReader
07-15-2007, 05:24 AM
Especially loved these lines....


and our voices, they were all entangled
untangled unspoken

Well done. :)

dibyendra
07-15-2007, 09:22 AM
Thank you Cdn for your comment for this poem.