Adolescent09
07-06-2007, 07:33 PM
Thoughts please:
The Predicaments of the Gambler
The stake is all on a stage of poker,
though steady is the astuteness of his hand.
He grazes the duo in a palm like sand
and pristine are his possessions in the air---
but like the maxims of matter they don't stay there,
since the calm of the closure must spread its tips
to relinquish chance for what it gives,
be it adverse or serendepitous.
The loss is the knell of a death blow call
his affluence seeped from thence,
the curtains of endless squander fall,
making the turn of time intense.
and turbulent are the tears of sorrow that float his boat,
which rowed his life through many wants,
wrecked his hull on a cluster of vaunts,
so carelessly taken by cube-filled whites with spots.
The Predicaments of the Gambler
The stake is all on a stage of poker,
though steady is the astuteness of his hand.
He grazes the duo in a palm like sand
and pristine are his possessions in the air---
but like the maxims of matter they don't stay there,
since the calm of the closure must spread its tips
to relinquish chance for what it gives,
be it adverse or serendepitous.
The loss is the knell of a death blow call
his affluence seeped from thence,
the curtains of endless squander fall,
making the turn of time intense.
and turbulent are the tears of sorrow that float his boat,
which rowed his life through many wants,
wrecked his hull on a cluster of vaunts,
so carelessly taken by cube-filled whites with spots.