Another li'l something

[symphony]

i wish to finish it sometime soon... but i'm afraid i might end up spoiling the flow...


Hark! The night speaks to us!
My ears yearn to hear the lyre,
My eager soul awaits
The senses of the voices of the silence;
For the night has stories in its depth,
Those which are bound, and pound to come out as sounds,
Knock and scream at the door of darkness
To unfreeze, and be released in the ease of the night...

[Adolescent09]

Sounds great up until now. Please continue! :)

[Adolescent09]

For some reason it oddly reminds me of a knight engaging in soliloquy before engaging in battle or something. This could be interesting if you keep at it!

[symphony]

a knight engaging in soliloquy before engaging in battle or something
Not a bad idea...
Perhaps i will try that one, later. But I do have to go take care of my viral fever at the moment. God bless the world!
Thanks for taking the time to read it, by the way.

[Debrasue]

i wish to finish it sometime soon... but i'm afraid i might end up spoiling the flow... Ohhh! Symphony.... I know how that feels!!!This is a great start...yeah, I can visualize a knight engaged in soliloquy...hope you feel better soon....

[Pendragon]

"voices of the silence" That says it all. In the darkness when the shadows convey their secrets, yes, you must finish this one. http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Bravo.gif

[symphony]

"voices of the silence" That says it all. In the darkness when the shadows convey their secrets, yes, you must finish this one.

I really wish to. My pen doesnt flow as swiftly as it does with the others in this forum, and the physics/chem./bio. classes i attend arent inspiring enough either :( so i always have to wait for that "flow" to come and grab me! And, *sigh*, there are these times when it never comes! :brickwall