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rebecca10
07-03-2007, 09:00 PM
A moment of madness, a moment so low
When life was once happy and I managed to grow.
Surrounded by people I don’t really know
Escaping the normal and entering deaths gallows.

Trying to blend in so confused and scared
“Go on try it” was all I heard.
The pain and the filth as I pushed syringe in
Felt itchy and cold but calmness within.

The sickness, the sweats, the stealing, the lies
I’m facing the devil look deep in his eyes.
I can’t reach normality, once it was grim
Now, I wish I never gave in.

Theft, paranoia, living in shame
No one to turn to, but I am to blame.
I just can’t see daylight please help me choose life?
Desperate to leave this but cant find the
Right road to go down and people to trust
The hits worth more than anything I lust.

Please help me! I’m sorry for all the pain caused
Escaping deaths gallows I struggle and fall.
I started so young and thought I was so strong
Giving up this infinity is so ****ing long.

People of any age drawn to this heat
Drawn to this holiday, please god just retreat.
Now that I’m edgy, skinny, living in dirt
One beautiful moment caused massive hurt.
Not only in my life, but in others to
Take the advice, get help, pull through

Black eyes and gauntness, my body lies crude
Anything I’ll do now to get close to you
I never thought I would get this way
I stepped over the line of insanity.

Its not worth that moment
Its not worth that fix
Please look at me now
Remember this script.

By Rebecca Heffernan

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rebecca10
07-03-2007, 09:01 PM
P.S this poem is not a personal experience. I have seen the pain through past friends. Bekk

Adolescent09
07-03-2007, 09:40 PM
It looks and sounds flawless. Continue to write more and do whatever you do..I don't know any better advice to give.

Debrasue
07-03-2007, 10:25 PM
rebecca10....this is an incredibly insightful and non-judgmental poem...from the tormented users perspective...just wonderful awareness on your part...and an amazing ability to put that hopelessness and despair into words...good poem!

Pendragon
07-04-2007, 08:50 AM
To be able to give voice to what you see in another's eyes is a rare gift. Use it wisely. Wonderful poem. http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Appaluse.gif

rebecca10
07-05-2007, 01:52 AM
thank you all for the feedback and comments, your honesty and support means alot. Bek x