As If Words Could Spell The Hour's Love This Skin Sweats

[jon1jt]

when a 'feeble attempt' to write in my style receives three times the number of comments, it's time to take a bow. lol!

dramas, amp, and adol: thanks for commenting!

i live my broken dreams. :)

[dramasnot6]

Wow...
Your poetry always presents the most vivid descriptions of such small snippets of a moment of sensual experience (such as " curves of your white neck " structured in such a way that they seem to flow together as a single answer to the purpose of living.
Amazing work as always Jon.

[ampoule]

I can see you are doing more than 'leafing and loafing'. Very nice imagery. I am at a place in my life where that 'biting lip thing' sounds pretty good. ;)
I liked it....your poem.

[Adolescent09]

God strike me with a slab of invisible mahogany wood if I understand a word of what your poetry means but man... it sure sounds GOOD!

Teach me? :D