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LucienMidnight
06-26-2007, 09:24 PM
Ocean, opens the auction obeys the owner’s oblique action friction oval oozing ozone spoken of the oak oats over the okayed orchard mission with The Warm informs the war warbler swarm wobbles of the lukewarm warlike warhead deformed warriors and warps the warplanes that perform of the beard that carry’s the bier of beer need to put the power in a pouch so there isn’t pouting powder that’s pounded in an hour so it doesn’t turn that sour

Pendragon
06-27-2007, 09:13 AM
I still cannot get used to this poetic form, but this is a fun poem, full of tricky alliteration, synonyms, and puns! Good Job.


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Mortis Anarchy
06-27-2007, 03:59 PM
:D The title reminds me of that Modest Mouse song, Ocean Breathes Salty:D

jon1jt
06-28-2007, 07:53 PM
Ocean, opens the auction obeys the owner’s oblique action friction oval oozing ozone spoken of the oak oats over the okayed orchard mission with The Warm informs the war warbler swarm wobbles of the lukewarm warlike warhead deformed warriors and warps the warplanes that perform of the beard that carry’s the bier of beer need to put the power in a pouch so there isn’t pouting powder that’s pounded in an hour so it doesn’t turn that sour

that's quite a lot of words you got there. :alien:

is that jack kerouac, Lucien Carr "LucienMidnight"? ;)