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Lolita
05-10-2004, 12:13 PM
Wow. I haven't written a poem (if you can call it that) that rhymes since I was about 6. I know its not long. It was done in about 2 minutes. I was just excited about the rhyming!

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Empty gin bottle by her bed
An army of words in her head.
Curled up in a heap on the floor
The army is ready for war.

Her defences are held up high
The enemy won't see her cry.
Silver shields protecting her pride
Dreading the day she cannot hide.

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Ta-da!

Suetang
05-11-2004, 10:20 PM
Hi Lolita

You rhyme very well.........great job!

Take care........Sue

SmilesAF
05-21-2004, 12:59 PM
Special...very special

xby
05-22-2004, 02:53 AM
good, it's the heroic couplet!