A T.V set diary

[Momtaz]

hey guys i wrote this poem a week ago and i need to know what do u think about it, cause its my first time to write something like this waiting for ur comments.

A T.V set diary
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They call me names
optimistic, pessimistic, fantastic, realistic
and sometimes T.V
from the words that you red above
now you wanna see my C.V

I have license to say whatever i want
license that have been sealed, signed,and registered
but
when its about to act
i act according to one head
cause if i acted wrong
I will be shot dead

get in from right
get out from left
get in from left
get out from right

I am took a road has no end
road that is dark no light on sides
why need light while i have some inside
lights that fake will never light your sight

I accept stakes
cause winning is the only thing i do
so
if you coming pass my stock house
don't itch your head just move
just go

I will never stop talking
and you will never stop listening
Surrender now or
cease
cause you may listen to me
but
(whispering) "never act like me"
please

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WAITING >>>>> :D :D

[Pendragon]

I kinda like it, really. TV talking to people like a parent to kids, don't make the same mistakes I have...

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