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madrox
05-09-2004, 07:57 AM
My ideal world

My ideal world is a world that cares
A world that accepts and a world that doesn’t stare

A place that I can be just me
A place for all and a place to be free

Somewhere I can belong and fit in
Somewhere I’m wanted and somewhere I don’t get tossed in the bin

Full of people that I can love and be loved by
People who don’t laugh and people that don’t make me cry

A planet where everyone is treated the same
A planet that doesn’t fight and a planet that has no shame

Does my ideal world exist? The answer is unclear
But one thing I know, it’s sure as hell not here

Suetang
05-09-2004, 10:08 PM
Hi madrox

Your words were very thought provoking and I wish there was such a place. Some people have a lot to answer for in the way that they treat others. I am sure many people could relate to your words.

Take care.........Sue

Kendall
05-10-2004, 03:12 AM
NIIIICK!!! I LOVE the last two lines, I'm glad to see you ended it in such a great way. It's awesome!

silver
11-20-2005, 11:16 PM
my sweetest world is my home
i return here after whwerever i roam
i see glowing faces of my children
which make me forgot my worries
when my wife smiles to see us
we feel flying in a heavenly bus

EpItApH
11-24-2005, 01:33 PM
My Home:
is my HELL

hehe..

Nice poem Madrox.