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Kendall
05-09-2004, 05:38 AM
Yeah, different to usual, right? I guess so. I'm listening to Bon Jovi and this specific song has THIS effect on me.


I was crying in the rain
The drops falling from my fingertips
Running over my lips
I couldn't tell which were tears and which weren't
But I could feel the beat of your heart against mine
It's a shame I got scared
It's a pity I ran
Because I do need you, every second and every hour
But standing so close kills me
To literally breathe you in is heartache
Yet so much beauty
I couldn't tell which were tears and which weren't
But I could feel the beat of yours heart against mine
Just before I left.

madrox
05-09-2004, 08:00 AM
Wow kendall that really awesome! keep up the good writing

Suetang
05-09-2004, 10:07 PM
Hi Kendall

I really enjoyed this fine piece of writing and I have to say I had images of a Guns n Roses song in my mind when I read this.......November Rain.

Take care.........Sue

Kendall
05-10-2004, 03:06 AM
Haha. I LOVE that song. Also, Paradise City, woohoo! I was listening to that today, actually.
Thanks Nick & Sue!