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Suetang
05-07-2004, 02:18 AM
This is the very first poem I ever wrote back in February 2001

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I sit alone beneath the sun
On this perfect Summer's day
My life hasn't been the same
Since the day you passed away

As I stare across still waters
I hear a seagull's mournful cry
My heart still feels so empty
As the days move slowly by

So lost I am without you
But my love stays ever clear
When I close my eyes at night
I imagine that you're here

You were taken from me so quickly
I was not with you when you died
My heart lay torn and tattered
And a sea of tears were cried

Thoughts of you are always with me
And my memory remains so strong
I still miss your loving presence
Some days can be so long

The sun starts sinking lower
As this day comes to an end
My life's moved on without you
But my heart will never mend

The gulls take flight, the moon is full
As I turn and walk towards the hill
I stand and let the moon reflect
On times we had, I'll never forget
Your guiding light shines down on me
You're part of the moon, the sun and the sea

fallen_angelx86
05-08-2004, 12:16 PM
there are very few people who are able to put emotions down into words and yet still be able to sound sincere...you are one of those people!
Keep smiling...Hannah

madrox
05-08-2004, 08:29 PM
Wow... thats great Suetang

Avalive
05-09-2004, 07:50 PM
why can u write so many love poems? the poems u wrote are all about romance. u must be a sweet girl
smile. it is good.

Suetang
05-09-2004, 10:03 PM
Hannah - your words humbled me greatly and were so heartfelt.

madrox - thank you so much for taking the time to read my words.

Avalive - I have no explanation as to why I write so many poems about love and romance. Most of what I write about is pure fiction but this one was very real. Thank you for reading my words.

Take care..........Sue