History of Ages!

[MysticalWriter]

History of ages,

From the very simple men to the great mages,
And of course, beyond,
There has always been breaking of bonds.
Wars fought, children die,
Mothers and fathers both cry.
Even so, though there be trials,
Haven't we gone so many miles?
Minds evolve, humane laws,
We have not made too many flaws.
So why complain of the death
That was clearly not of meth?
Of wars and trials, many have passed,
But haven't we yet progressed?
Our civilization, certainly, is based on war,
Truly our nation's core.

I had to write this for History class last year. =) I hope you enjoy it !!

[symphony]

the theme of the poem looks great, good thinking :thumbs_up


In this seemingly never ending end of what we call- life, I live.
i really liked this bit in ur signature, is it something u urself wrote?

[dramasnot6]

I agree with symphony, you develop the theme really well and use a very structured narrative. well done!

[Pendragon]

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Liked the title of the poem being also actually the first line!

[Shurtugal]

it was really nice and makes a lot of sense. which is rare for me to understand. at least most of the times. =)

[MysticalWriter]

the theme of the poem looks great, good thinking :thumbs_up


i really liked this bit in ur signature, is it something u urself wrote?

Thank you. In fact, it is. It is not the exact words, but yes it is very close ( I am away from my dear quotes/poems). I have yet to have it on my computer, but soon, it will be posted. I have several poems that I have written/editted that I would love to have others critique it.

[andave_ya]

Made a lot more sense after you explained it to me. I like the tone of it, sort of like asking but knowing the answer. A rhetorical sort of thing. :thumbs_up: