Something About You

[totyfroty]

Something About You

I found something
When I saw you
I found something
Which is very true
You gave me strength
You told me things
I heard your eyes
Speaking to me
I felt them sincere
I found you near
I thank God for you
Everyday my dear

[Pendragon]

Hi Toty. Love it!

These lines are special:



I heard your eyes
Talking to me


A++ on this poem!

Pen

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[totyfroty]

Thanks Pen

[Shurtugal]

Hi Toty. Love it!

These lines are special:



A++ on this poem!

Pen

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i agree totally! it is realy good toty!!:thumbs_up

[MysticalWriter]

Hm, well done. It really is nice. I read your other one and I noticed the same words: sincere and dear. I understand that they are two totally different poems and I did enjoy both. Perhaps other words would help explain yourself. Widen your vocabulary! There is so many words in English that can be wielded! DOn't be afraid to expand! =)

[andave_ya]

very rhythmic. Very nice!

[totyfroty]

Thanks