In your love

[aashishameya]

Mountains came to my door
Rivers became floor
And sky, roof
In your love,
I am one with the nature

[the silent x]

very good, nice little shorty to express your feelings, good job

[totyfroty]

This is very nice

Good luck

[Pendragon]

Nice, Assa. You need to really turn loose and show us that poet in your soul! There's a long poem there aching to be free. Come on, let it flow!

Pen

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/PuppyLove.gif

[aashishameya]

Many thanks to all of you, I dnt know poem become long or not, I wrote whatever at that moment came to me…dnt know when same spirit capture me again…

[Enchanted]

Short and sweet :)

[Dalisis]

very nice & cute i like it :)

[symphony]

hmm i like the idea of mountains moving and rivers becoming static. and it has this wonderful quality of being short and yet not abrupt.

[aashishameya]

people enjoy the poem that biggest achievement, thnx all

[shahsaab1]

Hey guys i want to write a poem can someone help me? I am totally new to this Forum so i dont even know how to come back here next time i log on lol if you want/can help me please send me a private msg thanks so so so much

[paperleaves]

beautiful expression of self, in concise lines.
perfect :)