Poem

[linz]

GREY LINE ENDLESS

JOINT BONES OF REASON

CRUSHED SHADOWS

IN HURLED LEGIONS DISPELLED

LABORS COLLOSUS

TO STONES CRUSHED PALACE

DESERT MINGLED IN

TIMES POURING OF WATER

BLOOD BY DEATH

AND SKIN FOR SKIN

[Elle***]

hi, i liked this...i like the way the lines were very short but also very affective...

i also read your first poem as you said mine was similar to your first and i totally agree with you there as well...:)

[linz]

hi, i liked this...i like the way the lines were very short but also very affective...

i also read your first poem as you said mine was similar to your first and i totally agree with you there as well...:)


Thanks Elle***!

[Pendragon]

Nice. I am a fan of minimalism although I am terrible at it myself! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/PuppyLove.gif

[linz]

Nice. I am a fan of minimalism although I am terrible at it myself! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/PuppyLove.gif

Thank you. There is a way to connect what you are trying to say with more abstract words. I can't stop now that I have started doing it, because it's simply too much fun!