Lankey_gap
06-09-2007, 11:30 AM
Ok this is one of my poems, tell me what you think.
Photos of you:
There’s a hole in my heart,
that pictures of you will just never fill,
you moved on,
I stayed still.
I could’ve tried harder,
maybe righted my wrongs,
and now look at my heart.
its not where it belongs.
I miss the warmth of your arms,
the love in each eye,
These Hopeless regrets,
making me cry.
But you seem happy now,
and that makes me smile.
at least for awhile.
desperate denial.
God knows how long its been.
Since we last met,
weeks probably,
years I bet.
Its been , what?, two years,
of my silly, silly tears.
lets hope for both of us,
my grief’s end nears.
Don’t pity me!
I’m happy too!
without you!
Its true.
Like you care anyway,
all smug in glee,
it was perfecting for you,
once you left me.
You got a job, money, another guy,
well so have I,
I’m flying high,
I’m in the sky.
Sigh.
Photos of you:
There’s a hole in my heart,
that pictures of you will just never fill,
you moved on,
I stayed still.
I could’ve tried harder,
maybe righted my wrongs,
and now look at my heart.
its not where it belongs.
I miss the warmth of your arms,
the love in each eye,
These Hopeless regrets,
making me cry.
But you seem happy now,
and that makes me smile.
at least for awhile.
desperate denial.
God knows how long its been.
Since we last met,
weeks probably,
years I bet.
Its been , what?, two years,
of my silly, silly tears.
lets hope for both of us,
my grief’s end nears.
Don’t pity me!
I’m happy too!
without you!
Its true.
Like you care anyway,
all smug in glee,
it was perfecting for you,
once you left me.
You got a job, money, another guy,
well so have I,
I’m flying high,
I’m in the sky.
Sigh.