Cilivization and Nature

[kandaurov]

Not that I expect any reviews on this one, no. Has neither a deep, hidden meaning, nor fancy words. I just thought I'd put it here. I'm a big fan of analogies, childlike as they might be ;)


Civilization is Nature's evil twin
That plots her end with quite a morbid grin
Though Nature nurtured her and was her guide
Civilization is prone to fratricide

Nature can assure her peace within
Needing neither Hell nor guilt nor sin
Unlike her sister, whose heroes killed and cried
That they were right, while their brothers died.

[Pendragon]

May have deeper meaning than you know... http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/PuppyLove.gif

[Niamh]

I'm with Pen. There is alot to those eight lines kand.

[Bii]

Hi Kandaurov - I really enjoyed this, short but to the point and, whilst perhaps missing the fancy language it misses nothing in meaning. It has a good strong rhythm and, well, I was going to pick out a part I particuarly liked, but on reading it again I like it all!

I'll repeat my general mantra, even though it makes me sound like an English teacher. Punctuation, punctuation, punctuation!