Anew

[spally]

thi ismy choice
this is my plea
this is my faith
that none other has in me
hold my vow
repeat my words
this is my heart
without any guards
i have done wrong
i have known fear
my vow, my faith
that none has in me
my heart has known pain
betrail and fear
who i was
was divided
into pure and tainted
i hold my vow now
as my tainted self dies
with it my doubts
bringing a faith in myself
clouded by black
blocked by doubts
that others forced down
this is my vow
this is my faith
for all others to see
i am anew
for my old self has died
fire and hell
water and air
i bring myself new
from hatred and fear

[Not Finished]

[Pendragon]

Interesting start. Are you certain the poem is finished? I think it would stand alone as it is. http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/ThumbsUp.gif

[symphony]

I always liked that particular style of using limited syllables in independent lines in a poem. And now ur one made me like it even more. :)

[spally]

really, Pen?? you think so? idk, i started it and had a bunch of interuption. so a lot of what was originaly going to be there kinda got lost. thanks Symphony, its good to know that my poem made you like the style even more.