My Sweet Jade

[lifelonglover]

Whenever you breathe,
Whenever you move
I’ll be there
Just to be byYour side

I will sit there
Just to watch you sleep
Your gentle breast rising and falling
Like the waves on a calm ocean

You are the only one I see
When you aren’t there
My world goes cold
Your one embrace
The only one I ever need

Your sweet kiss,
The only one I ever want
Your blue eyes
Enchant me,
I could spend forever
Just looking at you

What I feel, it’s more than a feeling
Every time I hear your voice
My world becomes complete
I loose myself in you.

I could spend
Forever in your arms
Locked in one sweet embrace
That would last a lifetime

Your face all I see when I sleep
Your voice all I hear when I dream
Your lips all I taste,
You are all I ever want

I will do what you want for eternity
Just to see you smile

You are my one
My only
My night
My day
My world
My love and
My passion


hope you enjoy it!

[Sabriel]

awwwwwwwwww... lovely Huw!
;)

sie ist sehr Ziemlich!

and

ella es muy bonita!

:p

[Sani]

Jade - woooooooooooooh!

[Pendragon]

Very nicely done. I think though it might be wise to either end it before this
line: I will do what you want for eternity or rewrite what comes after it to conform with the rest of the poem. Good luck. http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/ThumbsUp.gif

[eladway]

a Good poem