Kain Legin
05-21-2007, 02:29 PM
Ok, I am an emo writer, not because I am emo but because that's what I am good at, I believe. :rolleyes: Anyway, here are some of my latest poems. Of course, they're not as good as the work of you people here, but take two things in mind, I'm not English and not a writer. =D but I am working to become one, so any help would be gladly received. Thanks!
Death
Freezing,
Cold, sad and feelingless
Far beneath where I used to be
I’m hamming
Birds’ songs that you taught me
I just want to be with you, my love
Hold you again
I want to hold you again
Feel your kisses, touches and hair
I know I may have passed away
But love is still here
I want to be with you
Doing what we used to do
Sading,
My sight, where I’m left alone
It’s so dark and
I can’t breathe anymore
Lost soul, haunting you forever
Do you believe that love can bring us back again?
I want to be with you
Doing what we used to do
I might be lost forever
But I’ll always be with you
To hold you
My love, our love can not be lost with death
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Girl behind glass
Kids running around the corner
Jumping, singing childish songs
I’m watching them from this cold place
Smiling with a child’s spirit
The sky overhead is so blue
A rainbow crosses the horizon
Cutting this world into two
Me and you
I in the dark where bats fly
And owls sing at night
Sending a shiver into my weak body
You in the sunlight where birds fly
Singing a heavenly songs of peace
I watch you across the glass
Thirsty for your happiness
Cold for your warmth
Cursed for your peace
My hands are tired from
Pressing on this spotless glass
The one separating us apart
Hands grabbing me from behind
Pulling me away from you
Why, my only light
Don’t take her away from me
I’m falling into darkness and you’re still smiling
‘Save me’ I cry out load
But my voice is so low for you to hear
I close my eyes, accept my destiny
And allow them to take me
Good bye, girl behind glass
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Back to life
Pen’s not stopping
Red ink droppings
The white papers are being colored
With rainbow words of my thoughts
Why should I go on writing?
What if my blood runs out?
Where would I get ink from?
Your heart would stop beating
And mine would fall thousand miles
Who am I without you?
Why did you leave my side and go?
Now I can’t go on writing
And the drops of blood are seizing,
Forever frozen in my thoughts
Trembling, my hands are
Without your warm touch to assure me
I’m lost in the unknown sea
Of my old, scary thoughts
Come back and say you love me still
That the world is still bright
And the sun won’t stop shining
That we can go on like this forever
With you by my side
And me writing for infinity
To free you and me
To free this world of sins
To bring you back to life again
Death
Freezing,
Cold, sad and feelingless
Far beneath where I used to be
I’m hamming
Birds’ songs that you taught me
I just want to be with you, my love
Hold you again
I want to hold you again
Feel your kisses, touches and hair
I know I may have passed away
But love is still here
I want to be with you
Doing what we used to do
Sading,
My sight, where I’m left alone
It’s so dark and
I can’t breathe anymore
Lost soul, haunting you forever
Do you believe that love can bring us back again?
I want to be with you
Doing what we used to do
I might be lost forever
But I’ll always be with you
To hold you
My love, our love can not be lost with death
-----------------------------------
Girl behind glass
Kids running around the corner
Jumping, singing childish songs
I’m watching them from this cold place
Smiling with a child’s spirit
The sky overhead is so blue
A rainbow crosses the horizon
Cutting this world into two
Me and you
I in the dark where bats fly
And owls sing at night
Sending a shiver into my weak body
You in the sunlight where birds fly
Singing a heavenly songs of peace
I watch you across the glass
Thirsty for your happiness
Cold for your warmth
Cursed for your peace
My hands are tired from
Pressing on this spotless glass
The one separating us apart
Hands grabbing me from behind
Pulling me away from you
Why, my only light
Don’t take her away from me
I’m falling into darkness and you’re still smiling
‘Save me’ I cry out load
But my voice is so low for you to hear
I close my eyes, accept my destiny
And allow them to take me
Good bye, girl behind glass
-----------------------------------
Back to life
Pen’s not stopping
Red ink droppings
The white papers are being colored
With rainbow words of my thoughts
Why should I go on writing?
What if my blood runs out?
Where would I get ink from?
Your heart would stop beating
And mine would fall thousand miles
Who am I without you?
Why did you leave my side and go?
Now I can’t go on writing
And the drops of blood are seizing,
Forever frozen in my thoughts
Trembling, my hands are
Without your warm touch to assure me
I’m lost in the unknown sea
Of my old, scary thoughts
Come back and say you love me still
That the world is still bright
And the sun won’t stop shining
That we can go on like this forever
With you by my side
And me writing for infinity
To free you and me
To free this world of sins
To bring you back to life again