I'll Lose Myself In You

[Suetang]

I've made a picnic basket
With champagne just for two
Here we lie upon the hillside
And admire the stunning view

We inhale the salty air
And view the ocean down below
The clouds drift by so slowly
As the tides ebb and flow

You place a daisy in my hair
And I reward you with a kiss
I feel like I'm in heaven
Such a day is pure bliss

A seagull glides by gracefully
As he heads on out to sea
This day is picture perfect
I feel much love surrounding me

And when the day has ended
Just as the moon comes into view
We'll succumb to our desires
And I'll lose myself in you

[Avalive]

I wish I could write a love poem.
But...

[emily655321]

That's really wonderful, Suetang. I hadn't noticed it was here till just now. Brava :D

[Suetang]

Avalive & emily

Thank you so much for your comments which were really appreciated.

Take care....Sue

[verybaddmom]

whew
awesome imagery. i love "reward you with a kiss"
i like to think that kisses are rewarding.
and i love the lingering thoughts i'm left with....

[Koa]

Originally posted by Avalive
I wish I could write a love poem.
But...

*sighs* even I ended up writing one... but from the wrong point of view...