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Ace
05-16-2007, 12:56 PM
The first two lines sort of popped into my head, so I turned this into a poem about 5 minutes ago and thought I would share. I don't mind sharing since this is practically anonymous:

Never mind the fickle willow,
Who blows with any breeze.
But remember the sturdy oak,
Which only flutters leaves.

And remember not the tall lily,
Which wilts on a hot summer day.
Think of instead a stout orchid,
One which will never fade away.

Do not think of the ocean,
A fiend which never stays the same.
Security is found in pools,
When controlled they are quite tame.

If only I had known this before,
My garden would have lasted forevermore.

Nightshade
05-16-2007, 05:25 PM
Oh I like this I do :nod:

Pendragon
05-17-2007, 09:21 AM
Nice sonnet. And boy do I write sonnets! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Bravo.gif This one a sweet, simple message!