regard

[AZBOUND]

If you didn't like the first one, maybe you'll like this one??



REGARD

A feeling of silence comes upon me
like the calm feel of a fresh spring morn
Searhing for memories of all things past
As the soil adsorbs the morning rain
Rejoice upon all things to come
As distant thunder anticipates the storm
Who with, what, where, how and when
Or will it be a lone soldier on the end of his path
Knowing that only time will tell the events to come
I know I shall be free, for I have done my best
And for you I wish the same

[Pendragon]

A nice little poem, but work on that third line... http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/BlackCrow.gif

[AZBOUND]

A nice little poem, but work on that third line... http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/BlackCrow.gif

Thanks for the feedback, I will work on that.
Have you looked at "think" post date yesterday?
I would appreciate your feedback there too.
I am new to this and thought i'd see what people thought.
adding a new one today, "ARISE"

THANKS AGAIN