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Suetang
04-11-2004, 05:48 PM
I move gently with the tide
As it is guided by the moon
Many lovers walk beside me
Under love's spell they swoon

My color sometimes varies
From deep green to sapphire blue
I'll cool you down in Summer
As my arms envelop you

Many vessels travel upon me
Searching for a guiding light
Whales call to one another
Throughout the dead of night

Dolphins swim inside me
And the seabirds come to dine
I am home to many creatures
In the sunlight how I shine

And when the day has ended
After the sun has set on me
I'll rest beneath the moonight
And stay as calm as I can be

Avalive
04-12-2004, 12:43 AM
I was about to write a poem about ocean. Unfortunately, I hardly had any inspiration. I see the beauty moves in front of me. But, I can not grab any good words to make them alive on my paper.
U depicted well. A good scene I can see thro ur poem.

Suetang
04-14-2004, 06:41 PM
Avalive

Thanks for your comment. I live near the sea and it has always inspired me.

Take care

Sue

flier58
04-24-2004, 05:12 AM
We don't live too far from the sea, we are in Lancashire, England. A short while ago we were coming through one of the seaside towns around sunset so we stopped to what it set over the sea - it was really pretty - quite romantic in a way.

I think your poem catches the beauty of the ocean really well.
:) :cool: :)

Suetang
04-24-2004, 09:47 PM
Hi Gillian

Thanks so much for your lovely comment. I live in Australia and only a short walk from the beach. I always find so much inspiration whenever I go there.

Take care..........Sue