Of my love - comment please

[vhaney]

;lkjhgf

[Pendragon]

Very good. I like these lines:

Where stars are formed and angels there
Dance upon those new found worlds

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[zutroy]

Absolutely beautiful. I'm a fan of love poetry because I think it takes a very good poet to avoid the obvious clichés of love poetry, which you have succeeded in doing. I like the theme you incorporated in the first four stanzas (the color...the color...the whisper...the fragrance), and your lines flow with incredible smoothness. At first I thought the last two lines of the last stanza were somewhat awkward, but it was just my reading of them. Awesome job :D

[Bianca Fransen]

Very beautiful. I absolutely love it

[Triskele]

nice, i am a bit, jealous, but i think i have managed to mostly keep it in check, well played my friend.

[Wtalbot]

I like it but I know little about poetry. I just know when I enjoy reading something....yours I enjoyed.

[vhaney]

to all,
I appreciate the positive feedback on this piece. It was one of those creative moments that occur during a difficult time.