shadowy girl
04-29-2007, 12:25 PM
this is a poem my english teacher corrected for me.. proving how weak english I've got... :( :bawling:
The red Emerald in my chest,
Can bare no more chapters or even pages of my life
I'm a bird lost between the rays of the sun, looking for a nest
But my loneliness and strangeness had lasted for ages,
In this world, no doubt, I must be the saddest
I can't set myself free when I'm jailed in a hundred cages
The sun will rise, again, after every night and in every day,
But not a single golden thread will ever reach me
I'm locked in a room with walls that are black and gray,
With no sounds to hear, and no colors to see
I stopped here, and saw others reaching the end of my way,
And because of all that, my fate became my enemy
I remember that I cried, but every tear went dry,
and that I tried, but every trial died before it was born
Every time I blame life, and start an endless cry
I remember that every tree, where ever planted, used to be a corn
Still, and with every Encouraging word that was spoken, I will never try
But I'll Survive, only with a spirit that is low, and a heart that is torn
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The red Emerald in my chest,
Can bare no more chapters or even pages of my life
I'm a bird lost between the rays of the sun, looking for a nest
But my loneliness and strangeness had lasted for ages,
In this world, no doubt, I must be the saddest
I can't set myself free when I'm jailed in a hundred cages
The sun will rise, again, after every night and in every day,
But not a single golden thread will ever reach me
I'm locked in a room with walls that are black and gray,
With no sounds to hear, and no colors to see
I stopped here, and saw others reaching the end of my way,
And because of all that, my fate became my enemy
I remember that I cried, but every tear went dry,
and that I tried, but every trial died before it was born
Every time I blame life, and start an endless cry
I remember that every tree, where ever planted, used to be a corn
Still, and with every Encouraging word that was spoken, I will never try
But I'll Survive, only with a spirit that is low, and a heart that is torn
copyright ©
[email protected]
I hope you enjoyed it!