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aashishameya
04-29-2007, 02:33 AM
Take a deep breath
Remember all the deeds
Done by you
You feel death before death
Adolescent09
04-29-2007, 08:16 AM
ermmm ok :).
Pendragon
04-29-2007, 10:32 AM
Nice. Minimalism. Sometimes thats all you need! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/ThumbsUp.gif
aashishameya
06-11-2007, 03:27 AM
what other guys think about this?
symphony
06-11-2007, 06:19 AM
I agree with Pendragon in this. Simplicity is indeed the best. At the end of the day, after the tangle of jangling words, I rather find solace in the simplest of words- "know thyself"...
Anyway, my comment on the poem: not bad. :thumbsup: